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Tuesday, February 9, 2010

From A Seven Year Old's Pen

(AH! I posted twice in one day! The Posting-Until-It -Gets-Obnoxious Bug has bitten me! AHHHH!!!)

This is a story entitled The Boxcar Children that I have posted several times on my blog.

Just reading this makes me feel nostalgic all over again. I have changed so much. It's not the changes in and of themselves that are bad, but the fact that I'm changing. :(

(All typos are purposeful. I typed the story just as I had written it five years ago.)

The Boxcar Children
By Rebekah Alden

There lived 4 children. The oldest one was Joshua, 18. The next was Kylee, 16. Next Evan, 15. Next was Rebekah, 14.

One day Rebekah looked out the window of there big house.

“I want to go outside!” She anocconed.

“No silly goose!” said Kylee “its raining!”

“Caml down!” said Joshua loudly.

“Yea!” agreed Evan.

“Okay!” said Rebekah.
They listen to the pitter patter of the rain.

“I want to go outside,” said Rebekah.

“I told you No!” said Joshua.

“Okay…!”

“Time to go to bed!" Said Joshua.

“Okay!” everyone said.

In the morning Rebekah woke first then she got dressed and went downstairs quickly and quitly for not to everyone wake up.

“Why does everyone boss me around?” she quisoined herself.

“Why am I the youngest?”
“Why do I have to be 14?”

“Why do I have to be me?”

“Why, do I?

“Rebekah?” said Kylee, coming in.

“Huh?” Rebekah turned around. “Did you hear me?”

“Yes,” said Kylee. “I know how you feel.”

“How do you?”

“Once Joshua always bossed me around once I was the youngest.”

“You, where?”
“Yes.”
It was breakfast and Rebekah chewed thoughtfully.

“Why are you so quit?” asked Even.

“Nothen.”
“Oh”

Rebekah and Kylee shered a glance.

A silent gulped the room as the 4 children chewed there breakfast slowly.

After breakfast Rebekah and Evan went to do there schoolwork.

Kylee and Joshua went outside to talk.

“This is a fine day,” said Kylee.

“Yes.”
There was a pause. Joshua broke the silence.

“You look preety.”
“Thank you,” Kyle said “you look handsome”

Down in basement Even and Rebekah where working.
“I’m Done” Evan said. He went outside with Kylee.
“Where’s Joshua?” asked Evan.

“In his room.”

Evan came and sat with kylee.

They sat there ton fifteen mintuns.

“Well, I’ll go see Joshua,” said Kylee “in his room, he must be lonesome.”

Kylee stood and went inside.

Evan lay on his back and looked up into the sky. It wasa bright blue sowling the rest of the world.

“I’ll go check the mail, see if there is any mail for me or Joshua or Kylee or Rebekah.”

He went, found some Mail for Kylee and Rebekah.

Evan went upstairs to the girls room, expecting only Rebekah, but when he opened the door Kylee was there too. Her face looked worried, so did Rebekah.

“Whuts the matter?”

“When I came in Joshua’s room, his face looked pinched, as if he hadn’t ate for days. I asked whuts the matter, he said he felt sick!”

“Why did he feel sick?” asked Evan.

“I’ll go ask him.” Said Kylee

She went and appered again. “he said he ate his lunch and saw a black thing, he thought it was a seed and he ate it.”

“Oh NO!” cried Evan “get a doctor!”
“I’ll call one,” said Rebekah hurrying on.
An hour later, the doctor looked down Joshua’s throat.

"Hm…” he said “it looks like Joshua ate not a seed…but a tick!”

“Oh No!” Kylee ran upstairs and Rebekah fainted.

Only Evan stood standing, but his face white as snow.

“My brother!” Evan gasped for air.

Kylee came downstairs, her face red from crying.

“Will he be alright? Will he be able to get out of bed?”

“he’ll be okay but it might take painchnt.”

“That’ll be okay.” Said Kylee.

The docter left.

“how should we get Rebekah up?” said Kylee.

“Let’s doump water on her”
“Okay”

They dumbed water on Rebekah and she woke up spporting the water out of her mouth.

Once Rebekah dressed in wrarm clothes she went down stairs.

Joshua was liying on the coch his face pinched and white

Evan and Kylee towerd over him there face looked far from relaxed.

The doorbell rang.

"I’ll get it” cried Rebekah.
It was Mrs. huckleberry.

She was holding a present for Joshua who was sick.

“I hope he will get better soon for my chrideren are longing for his Jokes he used to tell”

“us too” Reekah said “please come in Joshua would be plesed to have you here”

CHAPTER TWO:

Rebekah was writing.

Evan was reading.

Kylee was drawing.
And Joshua was asleep.
Rebekah was writing about a girl her age who livied alone in the woods, and fed on berries and roots.
Evan was reading about Robon Hood and his crew and how he stole from the rich and gave to the poor. And now his crew grew bigger and bigger.
Kylee was drawing a pichutre of a town and all the people running around and selling, bying and playing all the towns people loved there town by the looks Kylee put on their faces.
Joshua was dreaming, dreaming a horrible dream where he was bound hand and foot and thrown into the river where monsters sowlled him up.
“I’m bored!” said Rebekah putting down her notepad. “My story’s getting boring”
“Why?” asked Kylee looking up from her pad.

“Because I don’t have any Idieas for it.” She replied
Rebekah was taking a walk, thinking of an Idia for her story.

“I can have someone feed a Lion…No that’s too boring…”
At the house Kylee fed Joshua his medicine and Evan watched. He watched the gooey pink stuff go into Joshua’s mouth.

“Ugh that must be disgusting stuff!”
“I guess it is” said Kylee.
Evan looked up at his 16teen year old sister.
“Kylee, will he get better?”
“I think so”

Kylee hoped hoped and prayed. Joshua was slowly getting better and Kylee was thankfull but she would hope and pray intill he was better.
Evan did the same but his prayers where shorten then Kylee’s because he loved Joshua too it just his days were more busy then Kylee’s.
Rebekah loved to whrite. Evan loved to read. Kylee loved to draw. Joshua loved to play.
There hobbys were different but there lives were the same.
Joshua was waking and he knew he would have to eat his madincine.

He did not want to and his dream troubled him gratly.
Kylee went outside to hope and pray.
“Oh Lord God, Please help Joshua to get better soon and not get hurt and allow the sickness may leave his body quickly and gracefully so not to leave any sickness behind it.”
In 4 weeks, Joshua was better but very weak in his legs and stomace. His arms were not so strong but he was well agen.
“He’ll feel much better in 1 more week.” Said Kylee.
“He will?” asked Rebekah.
“Yes” said Kylee “The docter said so himself too.”

“Yippee!” cried Rebekah. “Then in 1 more week me and him can play War or Make a Match or Minopoly or Uno or Risk. We can listen to his Jokes, Stories, Knock’s Knock’s Jokes. We could play horses or planes or Legos or anything! We could go outside or play with the new neighbors. I can’t wait tell one more week!"

But in one more week when Joshua awoke from his deep sleep he will dispoint Rebekah greatly.
“Joshua, want to play Make a Match or Minopoly or Risk or Uno or horses or…I know lets go outside and play with our frands.”
“Oh…No I can’t I’m to tired maybe you can do those things with evan instead.”
“What!” I…can’t believe this, I’ll…I’ll…I’ll…I’ll tell Kylee!”
Joshua was sitting in his room watching people and things pass by with his binoculars.
“Akkool!” said Joshua as he looked at the lisences plate of a car.

“Okay” said Rebekah who was writing it down.

Rebekah was playing on the computer and she went to “Acarda Games” Joshua watched to make sure she did it right. She was playing Tank Games.

“Turn right…watch out…there’s a tank!”
“Okay.”
“hurry…shoot him…hurry…get that!"
“get that green thing?”

“yes…hurry…There’s a tank, turn left…move forward in attack!"

“Okay."

“There’s a helicopter shoot him shoot him again. Now get that red thing shoot him!” Joshua kept giving orders

Kylee and her friend were playing.

The End.

I will post soon, just about my life and the things going on. Soon, soon, I will have a post that doesn't have a point. Just a place where I can breathe.

Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Vote For My Science Teacher

US Bank is having a contest where they're giving away 5000 dollars. My science teacher entered, Ms. Jean Bakos, and she would use it in order to buy some more equipment for her science homeschooling program.

You can vote for her once per email address every 24 hours--I said I would spread the word. Please, go vote for her HERE.

This is her story:

Educational Support Gets Ahead



Educational Support Services was established to offer home schooled students hands-on science activities. I would use $5000 to purchase additional equipment. Items could include: a portable projector, tools for electronics, magnets, models for anatomy, prisms, tuning forks, light boxes, a pupil cam, fossils, rocks and minerals, stream tables, fault models, sedimentation tubes, globes, and weather equipment.



— Jean B.
 
I would appreciate it if you would vote for her, and I'm sure she would too. :)
 
Anyways, I was reading some of my old posts, and I'm thinking about re-posting an old story that I had written with I was eight/nine years old...just warning you, it's very lame, very funny, and based off of an old series I idolized at that age: The Boxcar Children.

Sunday, January 10, 2010

Short Excerpt of Elgaroth

I thought I would share a short excerpt (actually the Prologue) or Elgaroth--my novel that I'm working on.

This is completely un-edited. I haven't shown it to anyone. Please tell me exactly what you think--even if you think it's miserable. I love critique. ^^ (Don't judge the Prophecy of the Three too harshly--I know it's pathetic. I stink at writing prophecies.)

Prologue




IT WAS RAINING. The forest was silent except for the gentle noises of the rain pattering onto the mossy ground.

Then through the forest came the sounds of horses galloping. A black-clothed woman leaned over a black horse, urging it forward. A garbled word rolled off her tongue, and the foaming beast increased its speed.

Behind her, mounted on white horses, rode three men, their muddied white robes flapping behind them. They formed a half-circle around her, all of them reaching for their swords to cut her down, when the woman’s steed sprang to the left, knocking one of the white horses out of the way.

“Come back, Araldar!” called one of the white-men. “You don’t deserve to be used like this!”

“Trissa has offered me more then you could ever give,” spat Araldar, veering off to the side, causing the others to follow her.

“Perhaps, but she requires a much dearer price—your soul!”

“Leave me alone,” she said bitterly. “She deserves to read the prophecy. She deserves to be warned.”

“She is evil, Araldar! Her downfall will be the best thing that has ever happened to Elgaroth since the days of Creation.”

“She is powerful,” the woman corrected. “Unlike you,” she muttered resentfully and then commanded “Run!” to her horse. The panting steed bolted away with unnatural dexterity, outrunning the others, as it was given Dark energy.

The white riders reined their horses in, each rider patting his horse’s neck as they watched the black horse disappear between the trees.

The oldest-looking one bent his head. “It is over,” he whispered.

***
“My Queen,” Araldar dropped to one knee, her head bowed respectfully, offering the mud-splattered roll of parchment to the enthroned woman. “I have retrieved it. I have retrieved the prophecy that concerns you.”

“Well done,” said the woman coldly, reaching out a spidery hand and taking the roll. She unrolled it, and her black eyes quickly scanned the fine script printed on it.

PROPHECY OF THE THREE

THE PARALLEL WEAKENS;

THE WORLD OF SHADOW

FALLS INTO EVIL.

WHEN ALL HOPE SEEMS LOST,

THEN SHALL THE THREE APPEAR.

ONE SHALL TURN TO EVIL;

ONE SHALL DIE FOR THE OTHER TWO;

THE OTHER MAY KILL THE QUEEN,

OR SUFFER HER EVERLASTING WRATH.

ONE HAS HEALING POWERS,

ONE HAS THE GIFT TO SEE AHEAD;

BUT THE THIRD IS THE MOST DANGEROUS

WITH DESTRUCTION AS HER SWORD.


BUT WHAT ARISES FROM THE MUCK

WILL NOT EASILY SUCCUMB;

THE EVIL ONE’S GREATEST WEAPON

IS BUILT TO OVERCOME.


ON THESE THREE

THE FATES OF ALL REST.

WITHOUT THEM, EVIL SHALL DEFEAT ALL ELSE.


BUT IF THE THREE SHOULD SUCCEED

ALL IS NOT AS IT SEEMS,

FOR THE DEEP EVIL, THOUGH WEAKENED

SHALL STILL REMAIN.


AGAIN SHALL DARKNESS CONSUME THE LAND,

AND AGAIN SHALL ELGAROTH’S SAVIORS APPEAR.

BUT THIS TIME ONLY ONE SHALL COME,

MORE POWERFUL THEN THOSE BEFORE.


THE ONE WILL STRIVE TO

COMPLETE THE WORK SET BEFORE HER;

BUT WHETHER SHE SHALL SUCCEED,

EVEN THE PROPHETS CANNOT TELL.


BEWARE, EVIL OF THE LAND,

FOR YOUR DOWNFALL IS DRAWING NIGH.

The queen allowed the roll to curl back up. Her face was a mask, but her eyes were hard and furious. “So they try to scare me, do they?” she finally asked calmly, casting the scroll onto the floor carelessly. “It was a weak attempt,” her lip curled as she spoke the words.

“But, my Queen,” Araldar protested, furious that she was so nonchalant to this danger. I went to all this trouble, and this is how she responds, she thought, enraged. “Surely you will takes some precaution and send spies to Earth?”

Trissa glared at her arrogantly through half-shut lids. She considered this prospect for a long while before finally hissing, “You are disrespectful. But I will send spies to Earth.”

“Thank you, my Queen. I am glad you are wise enough to take this path.”

Trissa’s eyes flashed angrily at Araldar’s implication; the traitorous elf, catching the look, hurriedly added, “Your wisdom regardless should never be challenged. However foolish prophecies may seem, they need always be heeded.” Araldar bowed deeply, then turned and left.

As the door shut behind her servant, Trissa picked up the scroll again, and read it one more time. For the first time in years, she felt an icy blade of fear pierce her soul.

“They will die,” she vowed. “Every one of them.”

 © Bekah Grace

Hope that wasn't too mediocre or cliche or utterly lame. Please comment and tell me what you think. Input is vital in the blossoming of this story. ^^ (And no, at the present moment, I don't have a book-cover. I should do that on Gimp one of these days.)

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Thursday, August 13, 2009

...*dramatic drumroll* The Pathetic Story!

*laughs* I was laughing so hard while I was typing this into the computer... (Note: I did not change any spelling or grammer errors, so yeah. They're not typos.)

The Boxcar Children
By Rebekah Alden

There lived 4 children. The oldest one was Joshua, 18. The next was Kylee, 16. Next Evan, 15. Next was Rebekah, 14.
One day Rebekah looked out the window of there big house.
“I want to go outside!” She anocconed.
“No silly goose!” said Kylee “its raining!”
“Caml down!” said Joshua loudly.
“Yea!” agreed Evan.
“Okay!” said Rebekah.
They listen to the pitter patter of the rain.
“I want to go outside,” said Rebekah.
“I told you No!” said Joshua.
“Okay…!”
“Time to go to bed!" Said Joshua.
“Okay!” everyone said.

In the morning Rebekah woke first then she got dressed and went downstairs quickly and quitly for not to everyone wake up.
“Why does everyone boss me around?” she quisoined herself.
“Why am I the youngest?”
“Why do I have to be 14?”
“Why do I have to be me?”
“Why, do I?
“Rebekah?” said Kylee, coming in.
“Huh?” Rebekah turned around. “Did you hear me?”
“Yes,” said Kylee. “I know how you feel.”
“How do you?”
“Once Joshua always bossed me around once I was the youngest.”
“You, where?”
“Yes.”
It was breakfast and Rebekah chewed thoughtfully.
“Why are you so quit?” asked Even.
“Nothen.”
“Oh”
Rebekah and Kylee shered a glance.
A silent gulped the room as the 4 children chewed there breakfast slowly.
After breakfast Rebekah and Evan went to do there schoolwork.
Kylee and Joshua went outside to talk.
“This is a fine day,” said Kylee.
“Yes.”
There was a pause. Joshua broke the silence.
“You look preety.”
“Thank you,” Kyle said “you look handsome” she fluttered her eye lashes.
Down in basement Even and Rebekah where working.
“I’m Done” Evan said. He went outside with Kylee.
“Where’s Joshua?” asked Evan.
“In his room.”
Evan came and sat with kylee.
They sat there ton fifteen mintuns.
“Well, I’ll go see Joshua,” said Kylee “in his room, he must be lonesome.”
Kylee stood and went inside.
Evan lay on his back and looked up into the sky. It wasa bright blue sowling the rest of the world.
“I’ll go check the mail, see if there is any mail for me or Joshua or Kylee or Rebekah.”
He went, found some Mail for Kylee and Rebekah.
Evan went upstairs to the girls room, expecting only Rebekah, but when he opened the door Kylee was there too. Her face looked worried, so did Rebekah.
“Whuts the matter?”
“When I came in Joshua’s room, his face looked pinched, as if he hadn’t ate for days. I asked whuts the matter, he said he felt sick!”
“Why did he feel sick?” asked Evan.
“I’ll go ask him.” Said Kylee
She went and appered again. “he said he ate his lunch and saw a black thing, he thought it was a seed and he ate it.”
“Oh NO!” cried Evan “get a doctor!”
“I’ll call one,” said Rebekah hurrying on.
An hour later, the doctor looked down Joshua’s throat.
“Hm…” he said “it looks like Joshua ate not a seed…but a tick!”
“Oh No!” Kylee ran upstairs and Rebekah fainted.
Only Evan stood standing, but his face white as snow.
“My brother!” Evan gasped for air.
Kylee came downstairs, her face red from crying.
“Will he be alright? Will he be able to get out of bed?”
“he’ll be okay but it might take painchnt.”
“That’ll be okay.” Said Kylee.
The docter left.
“how should we get Rebekah up?” said Kylee.
“Let’s doump water on her”
“Okay”
They dumbed water on Rebekah and she woke up spporting the water out of her mouth.
Once Rebekah dressed in wrarm clothes she went down stairs.
Joshua was liying on the coch his face pinched and white
Evan and Kylee towerd over him there face looked far from relaxed.
The doorbell rang.
“I’ll get it” cried Rebekah.
It was Mrs. huckleberry.
She was holding a present for Joshua who was sick.
“I hope he will get better soon for my chrideren are longing for his Jokes he used to tell”
“us too” Reekah said “please come in Joshua would be plesed to have you here”

CHAPTER TWO:
Rebekah was writing.
Evan was reading.
Kylee was drawing.
And Joshua was asleep.
Rebekah was writing about a girl her age who livied alone in the woods, and fed on berries and roots.
Evan was reading about Robon Hood and his crew and how he stole from the rich and gave to the poor. And now his crew grew bigger and bigger.
Kylee was drawing a pichutre of a town and all the people running around and selling, bying and playing all the towns people loved there town by the looks Kylee put on their faces.
Joshua was dreaming, dreaming a horrible dream where he was bound hand and foot and thrown into the river where monsters sowlled him up.
“I’m bored!” said Rebekah putting down her notepad. “My story’s getting boring”
“Why?” asked Kylee looking up from her pad.
“Because I don’t have any Idieas for it.” She replied
Rebekah was taking a walk, thinking of an Idia for her story.
“I can have someone feed a Lion…No that’s too boring…”
At the house Kylee fed Joshua his medicine and Evan watched. He watched the gooey pink stuff go into Joshua’s mouth.
“Ugh that must be disgusting stuff!”
“I guess it is” said Kylee.
Evan looked up at his 16teen year old sister.
“Kylee, will he get better?”
“I think so”
Kylee hoped hoped and prayed. Joshua was slowly getting better and Kylee was thankfull but she would hope and pray intill he was better.
Evan did the same but his prayers where shorten then Kylee’s because he loved Joshua too it just his days were more busy then Kylee’s.
Rebekah loved to whrite. Evan loved to read. Kylee loved to draw. Joshua loved to play.
There hobbys were different but there lives were the same.
Joshua was waking and he knew he would have to eat his madincine.
He did not want to and his dream troubled him gratly.
Kylee went outside to hope and pray.
“Oh Lord God, Please help Joshua to get better soon and not get hurt and allow the sickness may leave his body quickly and gracefully so not to leave any sickness behind it.”
In 4 weeks, Joshua was better but very weak in his legs and stomace. His arms were not so strong but he was well agen.
“He’ll feel much better in 1 more week.” Said Kylee.
“He will?” asked Rebekah.
“Yes” said Kylee “The docter said so himself too.”
“Yippee!” cried Rebekah. “Then in 1 more week me and him can play War or Make a Match or Minopoly or Uno or Risk. We can listen to his Jokes, Stories, Knock’s Knock’s Jokes. We could play horses or planes or Legos or anything! We could go outside or play with the new neighbors. I can’t wait tell one more week!”
But in one more week when Joshua awoke from his deep sleep he will dispoint Rebekah greatly.
“Joshua, want to play Make a Match or Minopoly or Risk or Uno or horses or…I know lets go outside and play with our frands.”
“Oh…No I can’t I’m to tired maybe you can do those things with evan instead.”
“What!” I…can’t believe this, I’ll…I’ll…I’ll…I’ll tell Kylee!”
Joshua was sitting in his room watching people and things pass by with his binoculars.
“Akkool!” said Joshua as he looked at the lisences plate of a car.
“Okay” said Rebekah who was writing it down.
Rebekah was playing on the computer and she went to “Acarda Games” Joshua watched to make sure she did it right. She was playing Tank Games.
“Turn right…watch out…there’s a tank!”
“Okay.”
“hurry…shoot him…hurry…get that!”
“get that green thing?”
“yes…hurry…There’s a tank, turn left…move forward in attack!”
“Okay.”
“There’s a helicopter shoot him shoot him again. Now get that red thing shoot him!” Joshua kept giving orders.
Kylee and her friend were playing.
THE END.

*cracks up* I have come to the conclusion that I wrote lousy stories when I was seven. :D
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Wednesday, August 12, 2009

Well...

...I made a blog button for my sis! I got Photobucket, and got the html coding for the blog, but then messed it up somehow, and then had to fix the html which *sigh* was kind of tedious, but I finally figured it out and yeah! I whooped suddenly and at the top of my lungs when I figured it out, tested it, and saw that it worked and everyone in the room jumped :D

Go check it out, take it and put it on your blog!

Anyways, so I was organizing my many writing notebooks and came upon this story that I wrote like four years ago, and it was called the "Boxcar Children" (a weak imitation of the Boxcar Children) by "Rebekah Alden". I'm going to type it up on the computer soon and then I'll post it up on here, so y'all can laugh at it. :D
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